Your blog is not up to the standard!

My friend ( Indian ) messaged me that my blog is not up to the standard. Everything for him is okay, except for the language used. What's wrong with the language? Can anybody tell me if anything wrong with my language?

I am really opened for any criticism, no heart feeling! But for my blog, I've set up my own standard and I've made up my mind on how I'm gonna present it. When I used my 'kampung' language in my writing, it illustrates myself and most important, my stand!

However, thanks to that bro for the honest opinion. My blog, I'm quite sure that only be accessed by Malaysian or narrower, by the people around me. Barrack Obama might be too busy to log on to my blog as well as GAPENA, who is now very busy fighting for the demolish of eTEMS. So they don't have time to read as well as to complaint my language used in my blog. Don't they?

I am pure Temerloh...if I refuse to popularize my language, who else? Is my stand clear enough?

Koi : I am the master of my plan!